Do you see any patterns? When reading the beginning of my essay it is clear there is repetition within my essay as I am looking to talk about the importance of the arts in sciences. But I don’t overly use pointing terms or transitions mainly because I feel as though they were not needed in this particular area of my writing. Do you rely on certain devices? I would say overall in my writing I often rely on transitions. I…
I really enjoyed reading your essay, I liked hearing about physical therapy and the way the arts would impact your projected career. I would consider clearing up your thesis just so you set the tone for your essay as to whether you want the arts to be apart of your major or not. And then use this in your conclusion to wrap the whole essay up. I think you did a really good job analyzing the quotes in relation to…
When brainstorming I tend to do some bulletin and free write. I find this works best for me as I can write down what I’m thinking without consequences and get simply get your thoughts on the page. Then bulleting is a good way of remembering key ideas and topics to be talked about throughout the paper, and even the introduction. Bulleting can include things to improve or opinions, but I find this strategy extremely helpful. As Yo Yo Ma states…
Pinker and Ma both have an understanding of the importance of the sciences and feel as though improvements must be made in order to understand fully the world around us. In Steven Pinker’s article Science is Not your Enemy he states “To understand the world, we must cultivate work-arounds for our cognitive limitations, including skepticisms, open debate, formal precision, and empirical tests, often requiring feats of ingenuity.” When Pinker talks about the sciences he talks about the importance of them and…
